I was in Everett 4 days visiting my friend. I help him work outside. We went to a publid bath and had dinner on the street. I went shopping in Ross end with my mom. I played on my computer.
Sounds like a great break. Correct: publid to public. (Was this a Russian-style sauna?) Please tell me more about your friend. What kind of work did you do outside? I would like you to change this from sentences to a paragraph. Use words such as Also, After that, etc. to connect the sentences.
Привет Антон Городецкий! (Прочтал ли "Ночной дозор?") Мне очень понравился новый "лук" твоего блога. Через две недели когда будет время, я опять посещу твой урок!
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Sounds like a great break.
Correct: publid to public. (Was this a Russian-style sauna?)
Please tell me more about your friend. What kind of work did you do outside?
I would like you to change this from sentences to a paragraph. Use words such as Also, After that, etc. to connect the sentences.
Yes, it is sauna in English.
We have worked with him building houses.
Helped restore the old house after a strong wind. -)
Привет Антон Городецкий! (Прочтал ли "Ночной дозор?")
Мне очень понравился новый "лук" твоего блога.
Через две недели когда будет время, я опять посещу твой урок!
Счастливо тебе! До скорой!
Джон
OK! EDIT THE POST to correct it, please. Make it into a paragraph.
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